Like the winter sky
And the world is dead
No one's left to cry
After what you jus said
But I'm still alive
Wishing I was not
Coz your not in my life
And I loved you a lot
You did the right thing
But with sorrows it was laden
But really I could've given you something
Something better than heaven
last two line are realy good ....now dont think ki main maska mar rahi hoo ....achhi hai poem .............
ReplyDeletei wrote the whole poem jus to add those 2 lines dats why i dont like the poem.......bt thnx anyways
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